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Perfect Romance

"The protagonist Ashley Tudor, an extremely talented ballerina, is a complicated teen who is amid a love triangle between her longtime crush Zander Hogan and soccer star Aiden Buckland. The individuals are fascinating within this tale, and the story moves along energetically. You can see there’s a trust that allows Ashley and Aiden to open up with each other. While the romance, family distress, irritation, ambition, and high school social setting are age-appropriate, there is mild swear words, kissing, sexual encounters, and teen drinking which take you through the hardships of the school's social scene that many teens navigate daily and adds an optimistic twist: that friendship and honesty with one another can lay the foundation for a passionate relationship. The grammar, punctuation, and flow of the story are impeccable and I would highly recommend this book to everyone. "

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Really good

"It’s a wonderful adventure,as myself, I’m a bit of a tomboy with a dancing background, so I understood about growing up and becoming a women in a unique way. I know the author did this in the NaNoWriMo challenge and credits to you for completing it with this story. This is my first with the author, and I look forward to reading some more. All the best"

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Not Like Me

"Author omg!! HOW IS THIS BOOK NOT ON THE FRONT PAGE OF INKITT?!! this book should be published and be one of the books teens should read. HOW DOES THIS BOOK NOT HAVE ATLEAST A THOUSAND REVIEWS?!! I loved the plot and the characters especially Ashley she reminds me in the end of the story that I have to be myself and not change at all for any guy. I did find it annoying and frustrating that Ashley didn't know who to be with she kept switching from Zander to Aiden and I wanted to jump inside this book and grab her and say "Girl just choose already!" I'm glad Ashley and Leslie made up and became friends I'm so thankful Aiden beat the heck out of Zander who was such a idiot to Ashley for lying to her. Brittany was a interesting character for her personality and I adored Steph she reminded me of one of my best friends who acts like her. I'm proud to be the first review of this book and I have the pleasure to say this is my top favorite of all the romance books I've read here. I'm excited for more of your work. Good luck! -Leslie H. "

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Unique

"The plot was magnetic and it attained my attention fully. The first book I'm judging from the whole lot, not to mention. Your grammar was off somewhere I agree, but it was acceptable. Your character development was amazing and you took it real well. Good luck with marks *half salute* I've been a ballet player once and it was quite relatable. Your judge, Annabelle "

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Not Like Me

"The story plot was really good. The grammar and punctuation were off at times, but overall it was a great story."

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