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It's okay

"I like the content and every thi g but he plot just throughs me off in some way. But otherwise it's great 😊"

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Liked it

"It's your first ever chapter so everyone needs some help here and there like me :p I also have my first book on here with just one chapter If you could give it a read would be awesome. You story line confused me she knows she's pregnant the day after? Also she's happy with the baby but at the end really stressed and mad also on the short side for my liking but thats my I hope I don't offend you and I will keep reading see how this turns out."

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No Escape

"This story has a really great start, The plot is well thought and we can already see the people's feelings well. Just a small improvement could be made: The author wrote this as if she was talking which does not really fit the context of a book. Also check for repetition and punctuation. I love this beginning story and I can't wait to hear some more!"

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It's great

"I was so excited to write this story and I am so thankful for any amount of reads it gets. Thank you to everyone for your support ❤️🙃"

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