Aniera

The nederlands

Girl who loves werewolf stories hopes one day to write a good story her self

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Interesting

Good job! You made the start interesting enough to keep reading en then some hot and embarrassing scenes to make you addicted.
Some sentences are hard to read.
You describe a little too much for my taste but that's to blame on me.
Chapters weren't too long this can be a curse in the future if you get fans(as I'm sure you will) they will expect lots more(seeing comments on books).
Last you seem to get a little too fast to the plot of your story (the little story before your book I don't know what it's called) explains most of what already happened.
I will keep reading!

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Confusing but loved it

Some spelling errors but thats all i love your book goodjob !

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2 words LOVED IT

I loved your book the many words every chapter you even inspired me to start writhing myself :D
Greets form the netherlands

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Really good

Here isnthe review i promised.
Alot of swearing makes kinda uncomfortable but maybe its just this chapter.
The spaces with single words or a sentence makes the reading a bit jumpy
With beginning like this you cant strech a story very much at least i like reading a book that keeps me busy for a longer time
Dearing writing style matching the mood
Also found some classy words who dont match the style of the book try a little easier makes it nicer to read.
Like your names! Ill keep on reading

Im from the netherlands

And try grammerly for spelling it really helps

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Liked it

Story is fun but jumping times makes it hard to follow sometimes and mist the mate call at the end... and then a huge time gap of 6 years maybe some short storys in between you could make alot more chapters with what you have here keep going good job

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Liked it

It's your first ever chapter so everyone needs some help here and there like me :p I also have my first book on here with just one chapter If you could give it a read would be awesome. You story line confused me she knows she's pregnant the day after? Also she's happy with the baby but at the end really stressed and mad also on the short side for my liking but thats my I hope I don't offend you and I will keep reading see how this turns out.

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Liked it alot

I liked your book alot I only would have liked some more perspective from benij or Jason this would make the story more interesting I hate cliffhangers but you did a real good job here

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Loved it!

Your story is an whole other level and I have read along of books normal en werewolf alike Goodluck
Looking forward to your next book

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GOODJOB

Liked the story alot thankyou! I didn't like waiting so long for them to meet but you kept it exiting till the end

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