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Great Story

"This story has a great flow to it. And the humor is good. The author does a great job carrying the story along. Make sure to use the punctuation to help enphasize the coversations. Great job."

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Very good so far! Want to read more.

"I've read the first two chapters. The characters encounter a fire breathing dragon. Plenty of humor, I had a good laugh. Found a couple of grammar mistakes, but nothing that can't be easily fixed. I love the descriptions of the beasts and their abilities. Plan on reading more because I really like magical creatures and anything with Merlin in it."

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Spellbinding!

"Engaging- Check Sense of Humour- Check Great Characters- Check I only read the first few chapters, but there is much potential. I like the idea of how Tamara can save the world from global warming, and Fred makes me laugh. The concept is amazing, and the writing is perfect. Keep up the stellar work! Sofia"

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Recommended Read!

"Despite the difficulties that come with writing in the second POV, the author still managed to do so. This alone is impressive. Although I just started reading I noticed one or two things such as excessive ‘...’ or run on sentences but that doesn’t stop you from enjoying the plot. Speaking of the plot, I personally love how it ties in events of the past to the present. I’ve always enjoyed reading books like these. 5/5 rating for sure!"

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Great!

"Second person POV! Holy that's hard to do but the author nailed it! There's enough detail in the world to keep you engaged but not soo much that it takes you away from what's happening. The plot is very interesting as well and kept me on my toes wanting to know more, and the characters are well realized. Overall a solid well written story and I can't wait to see where it goes from here! :)"

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Oh crap !

"I hope this isn't the end 😔? I would love to read more. Another follow on book would be great. Loved the story and all the characters were great. An enjoyable and refreshing read amongst all the other books on inkit that are about werewolves, romance and erotica. You say that you write from your dreams, I wish you many more wonderful dreams to come. "

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