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Join me in the rollercoaster of emotions and fun Mind you, get a tissue and pop corn its going to be one hell of a ride
Give way for me0
I am not what you think I am0
I lay awake to stop myself0
From having nightmares0
One that hunts me everyday0
I hide myself from the world0
Because I hate it when I'm been pitied0
Its not like everyone will laugh at me0
But I guess not everyone will understand0
Maybe if I stay away0
All will be forgotten and all will fine0
Nontheless they don't know I exist anyways0
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Curious Wombat : This is a wonderfully written story it has a very poetic feel when you read it.I thoroughly enjoyed Ocean Poems and highly recommend it to all Inkitt fantasy story lovers.The story finished on a cliffhanger, time to read book 2 and see what happens to the characters.❤️
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Sienna Hayes : Hi, I’m Sienna! I read your story and I really liked it. While reading it, I was already imagining the scenes as visuals in my mind. I would love to adapt your story into comic art. I’m really passionate about creating comics, especially adapting stories into visual form. Your story could look amazi...
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Sienna Hayes : Hi, I’m Sienna! I read your story and I really liked it. While reading it, I was already imagining the scenes as visuals in my mind. I would love to adapt your story into comic art. I’m really passionate about creating comics, especially adapting stories into visual form. Your story could look amazi...
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LoveMe4Ever: Your writing is absolutely amazing! Inserting the poetry within the story really showcased the beauty of His story. I loved how you portrayed Khalil as a strong,faithful,Black Man searching for love after heartbreak. Well done!
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So alive, so meaningful. Only one comment, we think you mean You hate it when you're being pitied, not been pitied.
love it girl
that's so deep