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Good!

"I liked the starting. The plot is very good. And I hope that you will correct the mistakes and edit as moi- moi said in her review and I really believe that this story have the power to capture your attention so update it so I can comment and read. And I've reviewed this so please review mine too as you have promised. "

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5/5 ✨

"This story is literally perfect. All you need to do is space it out better (like indent paragraphs properly) and then check your grammar. Some words weren't capitalised, and they needed to be. Other than that, please continue, I'll definitely be waiting for updates."

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The Slayin of Ally Weaver

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