Inkitt
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Greeting And Appreciation Request!!

"Hi, I’m Aliana a professional comic, webtoon, and manga artist with a passion for cinematic storytelling. Your story has the perfect balance of emotion and intrigue that deserves to be visually brought to life. I specialize in expressive, high quality art that captures character depth and dynamic world building. Let’s turn your story into a stunning visual experience connect with me on Discord: Aliana_Jordan."

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fantastic

"definitely leaves you wanting more. please continue this story"

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Read

"Love love love it!"

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Keep coming back

"I have to admit, I keep looking for updates and then find myself re-reading Rane's story. It's good. Really catches you. Looking forward to see how she pulls herself up in the ranks. "

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Cyber

"So far so good. I’m enjoying the storyline. Test tube babies. Genetic testing. Clones. I’m enjoying it so far. Hopefully I’ll find out what happens between her and Aldo "

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Very good

"Very good waiting for then next novel"

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Cyber

"Its very weird I like it but needs to be longer"

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I love it!!!!

"A really good look into a world I hadn’t previously considered. Fantastic job in writing it!👍"

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Wish there was more

"I love the story so far. I would love to see more of this book. It is a very well written book and can't see what else this author has to offer. "

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Cyber

"I absolutely love the flow of the story. I feel as if I've encountered a plot hole or two but I just have this knowing that it's going to round itself out as the story goes on. I'm definitely rooting for Rena, and am most definitely feeling her loss/homesickness. Keep up the good work this book is amazing so far. I can't wait to see what happens next. "

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Cyber

"Beautiful story"

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Hydrospider

"The best story I have seen so far. Quite an imagination. I hope to see more of your work. Keep up the good work. "

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AMAZING

"Pls write more...don't want it to end!😂 "

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Cyber

"Like the fast paced nature of the plot."

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Great

"Story's great. Like I said, wish it was longer. And ps Africa is not a republic; it's a continent with individual countries and 'republics'. Hope this helps."

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