Inkitt
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"I'll be honest this the first mystery thriller story I have read on here and It did not disappoint. I loved the imagery displayed in the writing and how well this flowed. Good job to the writer."

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Nadia

"First thing First Story overall, good. the story structure and flow was amazing. What I like the most was the dialogue between the charactrs. it develops nicely and you can actually imagine being their. I like how the auhtor took it's time to create this thrilling and mysterious world. Kudos to you, Keep it up! Really good XX"

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Nadia

"The plot was very good. It was well planned and I liked the trilled theme. I felt like I was watching an episode of my favorite drama. I think that you will become a greater writer than me in the future. Or I should say you are a better writer than me. Good luck with your story, I will make sure to read all the chapters."

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