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Riveting!

"Great writing and intriguing plot. Very well done."

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Tracer

"Loved the level of suspense you kept throughout the story though I felt a bit disappointed with the ending. It felt rushed. I needed more info. Or is this a book one and more shall be revealed in book two??? "

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Intriguing and creative read

"Great plot with twists and turns that keep the reader eagerly turning page after page. "

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Tracer

"I liked everything, absolutely everything about this novel . I want everyone I know to read it , it's one of the best books I've read on Inkitt"

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Tracer

"The entire book was amazing with perfect levels of suspense, action, adventure, etc. It was amazing! Keep up the great work with any future projects."

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Excellent

"Please give me a good news that there is a second part of it...."

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Tracer

"I really liked how the main character's identity was kept a mystery until the end and that there was a spin on the whole reincarnation theory. I would recommend this to my friends that like reading scifi books. I rated everything with 5 stars because I really enjoyed reading this book."

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Great!

"Other than a few grammatical stuff, great! Awesome work! Novel idea makes a great novel"

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Romulus

"Great story. Perhaps the side plots are slightly too complicated, but definitely an author to follow."

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Miss

"Really good. Intriguing mystery to go the next chapter"

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Good job!

"It was a bit slow in the beginning, but it picked up. Good premise though. Maybe a bit more explanation on some if the technical things. Like why he has no palm prints other than some kinda medical thing"

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Interesting

"The beginning was slow to get going (to me). The character building was good, however when the plot was finally revealed only two major characters were there. I did not consider Matt a major character because he was not built up enough. The heroic ending was “ok”, but lacked in the great detail and buildup provided throughout most of the story. The ending in the hospital room was anticlimactic (to me). Overall it was a fun and entertaining story. Keep up the good work!"

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Tracer

"Great plot, love the time travel. Cute little love story on as well."

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Tracer

"Really enjoyed this story thank you"

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Tracer

"The Novel was so good, I'm waiting for a great revelation of who is the birth parents of Trenton and what he is in his past lives."

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Tracer

"Very interesting premise. At times character emotional development seemed shallow and superficial. Overall a very enjoyable read."

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A good read

"An interesting idea "

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Tracer

"I don't know the age of the author, Michael Cassata, but I'm guessing he's young; maybe around 18 to 20 years old? But the "mechanics" of his grammar are excellent! Being a published SciFi author myself, I'm biased for ANYTHING SciFi to Paranormal-related. I really like the fact that Tracer is taking on a very mature & global issue of Privacy in modern times; & how Cassata used the protagonist to deal with it, especially from a Millennial's point of view! Only thing I would suggest is perhaps a little more narrative for the setting of the story & a little bit on the major characters (eg, "government guy"...what agency is "he" from?). Otherwise, good job!"

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Trace

"Good suspense "

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Tracer

"A bit juvenile but an intriguing story. I'm anxious to see how it ends."

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