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What is your opinion?
Great work
"I really loved this story, it had some things that made you feel something and that's what's magical about it and I would definitely recommend this to others. "
Many Errors
"I love the idea of a story (but I'm a little concerned about the age range, it said Blaire was 14). However, the book is filled with grammar, spelling, and formatting errors. The summary is also subpar, and you have a habit of switching from scene to scene in an unclean way, and it's very choppy to read. I suggest taking it down, and asking a beta reader to help you comb through the work before reposting it."
