The Dawning of Fate by Keaja Williams
"This peice is ,in one word, brilliant. The plot flows and thickens with each chapter with a smooth transition from one process to the next. As with all peices of writing, there is a level of difficulty the writer faces when it comes to building a world, describing the land formation, building a language, building different species can be a daunting task. There is need for improvement, this is good because you can only become better. The rituals are very unique and truly beautiful. Some areas of conversation was a bit confusing at first because I couldn't clearly identify the character right away. The language usage between alien and human felt too simple, while I thoroughly enjoyed the foreign words here and there, the conversation could have been more alien, strange, it came across too common. I wanted more precision when the Alien spoke. I hope this description is clear. This book is a worthy read, I would recommend to anyone who is looking for something unique. Thank you for sharing this work with us Keaja Williams."