The Dawning of Fate
The Dawning of Fate

"Love the story, is this story complete? I recommend this book to the adventurous book lovers, I rate this based on the story. Fun to read, quite extraordinary. Hope the writer keeps on making exciting novels."

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Sarah

32 chapters read

A great read! Very interesting!

"The plot is so interesting and it has so many fully developed characters, the word imagery could use a bit more depth but it’s enough for me to get a mind picture of what these planets look like. I am enjoying the Main Characters and look forward to reading this full novel. I would keep this in the Adult only category, the sex and violence seem to be perfect but just not for young people. "

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Deb

40 chapters read

A Stupendous Read

"Through Star Wars and Star Trek I developed a love for science fiction along with all things supernatural as well. To me, this book has both because, unless I'm mistaken, Zan is going to be shifting into his dragon at some point in time. I'm hoping that the author does indeed write and post the second book because I would love to read the sequel. I definitely recommend this book to anyone that has a love for action, romance, science fiction, and metamorphosis."

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Joyce

36 chapters read

The Dawning of Fate

"An unusual alien romance that defies logic and life as we know it. You can't help but fall in love with the main characters as they fight those who want them dead. I couldn't help but think Star Wars, but with only one human. Interesting story. "

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Amy

27 chapters read

Fantastic read

"This is an amazing read. It has everything - great characters, a fun plot full of adventure & great details that give the story depth. "

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Shital

12 chapters read

The Dawning of Fate

"Such a marvelous and imaginative storyline as all elements is love,suspense awe to hold readers attention...just cant stop reading...great work by author keep it up 👍👍👍👍❤❤"

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Interesting story

"Well plot is written so Expertisely that i can see this with my open eyes. Amazing story love, passion, responsibility. "

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Fiona Walker

34 chapters read

The Dawning of Fate

"What a really wonderful story. It is well written with an interesting and unusual plot. I’m looking forward to book 2!"

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Sue

32 chapters read

The Dawning of Fate

"This was a bit different than what I have read in the past but it was very good well written and I look forward to reading book 2"

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The Dawning of Fate

"I love this! The witty banter, the sarcasm, the realistic human reactions starkly compared to this phenomenally built fictional world. The story, the characters, the scenes *chefs kiss.* Author, this is utterly beautiful. I absolutely cannot wait to read more from you!❤️ "

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Shelby Elise

40 chapters read

Help, my alien captor is too sexy!

"Yep, yep, yep, so fun, such great characters and an interesting plot, with spicy bits!"

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I love writing for you guys

"Thank all of you for being such amazing people! Yes i’m rating my own story. If you want others to hype you up, hype yourself right along with them!!"

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The Dawning of Fate by Keaja Williams

"This peice is ,in one word, brilliant. The plot flows and thickens with each chapter with a smooth transition from one process to the next. As with all peices of writing, there is a level of difficulty the writer faces when it comes to building a world, describing the land formation, building a language, building different species can be a daunting task. There is need for improvement, this is good because you can only become better. The rituals are very unique and truly beautiful. Some areas of conversation was a bit confusing at first because I couldn't clearly identify the character right away. The language usage between alien and human felt too simple, while I thoroughly enjoyed the foreign words here and there, the conversation could have been more alien, strange, it came across too common. I wanted more precision when the Alien spoke. I hope this description is clear. This book is a worthy read, I would recommend to anyone who is looking for something unique. Thank you for sharing this work with us Keaja Williams."

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magugu

23 chapters read

The dawning of fate

"Please continue this book it's amazing, I have already read it twice. Great plot . I just love everything about it"

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powerau

23 chapters read

More please!!!!

"This is a great story very unique I can’t wait to read more!!!"

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amablegene

14 chapters read

11/10

"Great story. Looking forward to more!!"

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Bobo

22 chapters read

The Dawning of Fate

"Amazing literally top tear the scenes are godly and humor is enough to make you lol I would really love to see a continuation of this!"

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It's amazing

"This is interesting definitely not something alot of people write about I love the uniqueness of your idea "

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rebeccamooki

20 chapters read

You need to keep writing. This book is amazing.

"I love this book. Please continue updating "

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sjdunlop9

19 chapters read

The dawning of fate

"This is the best book I’ve read on this app!"

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