What is your opinion?
Cool!💯
"Wow I loved this so much!👏🏻👌🏻✨ But I don't know why it somehow made me laugh😂😂😂 This is truly amazing I love it😂💯👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻"
3/5 ⭐️
"There are a lot of things in the plot that doesn't make sense. Where were they going when the plane crashed? And according to that, why are they in the middle of a forest? Why isn't Jacob a bit more terrified, I mean he IS the only survivor after all. Guns also aren't allowed on planes, so what in the world is he doing with one? Also if it's a journal entry-type story, I don't think you should pay much attention to dialogue as much as feeling, emotion, and memory. The summary is done quite poorly, and nothing makes a reader discard a story more than a poorly written story. There are also some formatting issues with the entires. Try spacing them out a little. You might also want to bold or italicize the headers. For instance "Day 1, Entry 1" should be in bold, it attracts more attention."
