Needs a Little Tweaking

"There wasn't really an attention grabber for me, so it took a while for me to become interested in the novel itself. Maybe make a more eye-catching cover? Or ask someone to help you create a hook? Some parts of your writing also fall flat and aren't as exciting for me. I like the characters though, love how the dad races for mental illnesses and disabilty. Also, all of your chapter titles have names except 4. You might want to go in and fix that. Your grammar, spelling and formatting are all amazing, so no problem there. Good luck with the rest of your story ^>^"