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Magnetic love

"The book is very good... It's suspense make me wanna read more My friend You are a good author "

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Yes!!! Seriously one of my favorite books!!

"I have read hundreds of books on Inkitt and this is one of my top favorites! Read it all from beginning to end in about 2 days time! Loved every minute of it!!"

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|Magnetic Love

"This book is for those who love vampiric romance. It is very well written, with a good balance of dialogue, internal thoughts and activities. Our one criticism is that is drags along quite a lot, before getting to the real problem around chapter 53, already 100,000 words in. We think this could be edited to lose around half of this to make for a better, tighter tale, with a more defined plot line. We suspect the writer has not planned out all chapters in advance, and is simply enjoying the process of writing itself. This may be what is slowing the plot down. It is unusual, in that unlike many vampire tales it is not an action based story, but rather is based on characters, and character growth and development. The characters are well crafted, and entertaining. Dialogue is sound, and full of humour. A good read."

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Nice

"I like your story. I love the plot and how everything flows. You keep everything together, and it's unique the way the story goes."

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Good read

"I like the mysteriousness of the story. It hooks you in! I am looking forward to seeing how the next chapters develop."

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Best of all time!

"Talk about a story that is all and all great and one of a kind! The emotions this evokes will take you on a once in a lifetime ride! Not to mention it’s hard not to fall in love with these characters!❤️ I highly recommend it!🥰"

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Magnetic Love

"Great story line, so many little twists and turns here and there, definitely recommend this if you are into supernatural romance stories ❤"

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Magnetic Trash

"Your grammar and punctuation may be A+ but your story is a F. One star for the technical writing skill not because your grammar was poor but because there was nothing special about it. The way you write is the way you write for business. If you have dreams of being an author you would have a better chance of selling this as a sleep aid from how dull it is. I have read medical textbooks that are more interesting. Instead of editing it, I would trash this work, little one."

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