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So far so good !.

"I was really enjoying it, I guess I didn’t understand it was only an excerpt. I want to read the rest!"

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Daughter if Albion

"I loved this story, I couldn't put it down. Your writing skills are fabulous, the storywas very engaging, and the characters came to life for me. I am looking forward to reading more of your work. Thank you. Regards, Linda "

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Daughter of Albion

"Absolutely fascinating story! Compliments to the author. The world created by the author is truly original. I felt like I was watching a movie while reading a book. Some chapters may be too detailed. But the overall impression is great."

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Daughter of Albion

"Excellent, just excellent 🤗"

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great read

"I really liked this book, it was a fantastic read. I got it through the Inkitt Book Group, and they never fail to find me a good book. It just hooked me right along, and I couldn’t put my phone down. Sometimes the wording was a little hard to understand, like a deep dive into the end of the pool, but rereading made it easier. It was truly a fabulous read, 10/10 :) good job"

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Daughter of Albion

"This was a true lily well written story. It was a bit slow at first but after the wolf building I was pulled right in. This is an amazing story!!!"

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Awesome book

"I love this book so much. I can't wait for a physical copy to become available so I can purchase it to add to my personal collection. I would love to reread. "

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5 Stars all Around

"Normally, dystopian fiction isn't my cup of tea, but I found that i couldn't stop reading it. The characters were very well-rounded. I liked how we got to see everything that Alex went through, her complete transformation from a young woman who obeyed every rule and law set, to this warrior who is determined to bring down the very society that she was born into."

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Daughter of Albion

"Very seldom does a story grip me so tightly that I finish it in one sitting. This book started slowly but kept getting better with character development and plot evolution. Although some bits could do with a bit of paring down, the style of writing kept my interest hooked. Would love to read it quite a few more times."

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Fascinating story!

"I very much enjoyed the journey this book took me on. It started a little slow but once she met Sanoske I was hooked. The slow simmer in the budding of their relationship was very well written. There were quite a few grammar mistakes but the book makes up for that with its gripping story. There were also a few plot holes especially when it came to the war scenes. Beyond that, this is so worth a read. "

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Daughter of Albion

"The book is very well written, entertaining and captivating. The characters are detailed and I like it take the story is told by her son and switches between the times."

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Daughter of Albion

"This story is addictive. I could not stop reading. Can't wait for the second book."

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Fascinating..

"Very well written. Intriguing and exciting story. Thank you for the wonderful journey. Looking forward to read the next book. "

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Wonderful!

"This book was amazing. The plot was very interesting and so was the world building; it very quickly got me wanting to read more. Great job :)"

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Best dystopian ever

"Fantastic book with great character development. "

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Daughter of Albion

"The book is amazing. I hope there is a book 2 coming soon. The character development is wonderful and the love the main characters find is a beautiful thing! "

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Awesome book

"Great story!"

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Daughter of Albion

"Great story. I hope you the best of luck with your writing. Throughly enjoyed this "

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Daughter of Albion

"Enjoyed reading this book "

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AMAZING

"This book is amazing!!! Great story and is written so well. The characters are all amazing and I recommend everyone to read. "

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