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Tales of Regventus #2

"Tales of Regventus: Keene is simply an amazing read! The plot is very clear throughout, and we never fail to lose it through side stories. It is intricately developed with characters such as Griffa, Desmona, Ansel, and Teryn guiding it, and I enjoy how you incorporated a side of romance and humor to make things more relatable. However, one pointer would be to show and not to tell. I notice that you write in a straightforward way ---- and it's not a bad thing because I quite enjoy it at times, but I believe instead of writing things such as "Ansel was worried about Griffa" you could instead show how Ansel was worried about Griffa (i.e. "Ansel's stomach twisted at the thought of Griffa, injured on the battlefield" etc.). Please be aware that I am not trying to tell you how to write the story, and only offering suggestions; honestly, I quite like the story as it is. Another pointer would be to run a spell-check through your chapters for reasons such as the ever-alternating spelling of Keen(e) and a couple of small (insignificant, really) typos. Overall, I really enjoy this series and look forward to reading the rest of the books! Your writing is lovely to read and I would definitely recommend Tales of Regventus! Thank you!"

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Mind blowing Book

"Tales of Regventus 2 is simply excellent loved every moment! A magical fantasy with heart, where Max, Griffa, and Ansel shine together, bound by a special bond. Highly recommend this series to all fantasy lovers! For more dpz visit https://dpwishes.com/."

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Tales of regventus book 2 Keene

"Sometimes the story is a bit slow and predictable. But it's very exciting too. I look forward to reading book 3 of the serie."

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I love this book

"I can’t wait to find out about what the blood magic will do "

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Can't put it down

"Literally obsessed! Love these stories so much!"

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Tales of Regventus 2

"Excellent. Absolutely loved it throughout. More than just a magical fantasy story. Max, Griffa and Ansel are stronger together.... I'm sure its because of their special bond. I would definitely recommend reading this series to all. "

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Tales of Regventus

"Book 2 delivers the same quality as the first. Through battles and hugs they make it through. I never did trust Marcus or his dad. I thought they came with their own agenda. I'm glad Griffa took her place on the ring of 9. Whatever will happen next? I'm gonna go read book 3 and find out🌹"

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