This is so good!!

"I need another book i loved it so much!"

Bonding

"I loved everything. Pretty much everything this book was amaszzzing"

loved it!

"great writing i honestly loved it so so much would love to read of this story and others! "

Prince an princess

"It was a good read thank you"

Great read

"A great read and intresting characters"

Bondage

"Ami and Jack are delightful characters Lars is a beast without restraint. Robert was a surprise. Good thing he popped up. What of Portia who tried to poison Ami? Fidget Lars survive or did he sink to a watery grave? You do have some editing but, who doesn't? With some smoothing of passages and correcting typos would make this a total 5 Best wishes to you, I hope to see your work in book stores soon! 💖🌹"

So good

"It is currently 3:13 am I started reading this at 1100pm i have tears I am balling like a baby. Maybe I am sleep deprived but I loved the story"

Path of love

" It is an amzing novel. I love it. The chracters are interesting . The sweet and sour moments are beautifully written . As for sharing the novel with other i am afraid i acn not do that as my friends are not quite habitual of reading . As for rating i like it all in all so it deserves five star "

Escaping from the obstinate prince

"I loved it espechly that they both got kidnapped to geather and rescude togeather "

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Like

"So far I like the plot and I want to know the turn of the story"

Enraptured

"The story is a little bit wordy, but the author keeps you in with her characters and storyline. And I am a sucker for a good plot like this :)"

Enjoyable read

"I find myself trying to figure out where the turning point will be, as I know it has to be coming... Each chapter makes my mind wonder anxiously as I get to learn more about the characters..."

loved this book

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And then?

"The plot of this story is intriguing and the author ends the chapters in a way that makes you want to continue. There were a few grammatical and spelling errors, some plot inconsistencies, one chapter seemed to start in the middle of a sentence, and there were plot gaps, i.e.: things not explained and left me hanging, including the "end". I would enjoy finding out the rest of the story."

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Pithy, Believable Fantasy

"So far, this is a very solid, quite humorous take on fairy tales and other medieval legends such as Tristan and Isolde, etc. The story takes that eternal dilemma of ancient lit, a young woman being married off against her will, and tries to find the humor in it rather than the pathos. The writer is very skillful in manipulating a large cast of characters and staging them with pithy dialogue. It moves very fast and effortlessly, and is tremendous fun to read. I really found myself giggling throughout. I really like how well the character seem to know one another and how they really seem to exist in the same world. In so many fantasy stories, you get the sense that one character is from Middle Earth and another from Shrek. You are very consistent and believable, which makes all the difference in fantasy. At times, maybe it';s played a bit too cute, and there is a lot of dialogue, which can impede the development of the story itself. However, with only a few chapters, this might not be a fair judgment. It's become almost too expected to take fairy tale tropes and turn them on their heads, so I'm waiting to see what you;'ll do that we haven't seen before. Your voice is fresh and you have tremendous skill, so my only criticism would be to shake up the story a little and do unexpected things with the characters. Occasionally straying from a dialogue-heavy approach might break up the narrative, too, and allow you to do and try new things that you can't attempt with characters talking to one another. That said, this is a great effort and I was very impressed by it. Keep writing!"

It's fair

"The story is fair"

Obstinate prince

"It's a good read"

No ending

"I find this very frustrating nothing is resolved. Also to much religion it got annoying there was so many other things going on that needed more attention. For example who tried to kill her? Or the story about the snake, what was up with that? Why did the prince want to run off in the middle of the wedding? I have 20 or more unanswered questions. Sorry I liked the plot but this story is incomplete and too many unresolved gaps. "