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Amazing story!!!

"This is an amazing story and I honestly can't wait to read more from you 🤗"

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Raw feelings

"I came across this story in the early stages before it was published. I have to say it was well thought out and the author put a lot of time into writing about such a sensitive subject. I think she captured the struggle of the mc pov very well without making it taboo to talk about. Great job"

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Going to buy this today!

"As someone who’s struggled with low self esteem etc I thought this book was so relatable. I haven’t read the whole thing yet but from what I’ve read as usual I love holly’s writing style. It’s simple and direct which makes its so much easier to read. I whole heartedly enjoyed Nat she’s super quirky but I love her personality. And I love how without an information dump in just a couple of chapters we learn so much about the characters and people in her life. I love how supportive her friends try to be it’s a very real and raw reality of struggling mentally no matter how hard people try to help sometimes nothing really helps in the moment. I’m excited to see how the story unfolds and get to know the rest of the characters. I definitely recommend this to anyone whose going through struggles mentally teenagers and adults. I’m only 20 but it kinda takes you back to early teen years ❤️💕 I’m not a grammar police but I think the grammar here was nearly perfect and if it wasn’t it certainly doesn’t interfere with the readability "

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Busted Bubblegum

"I haven't read the whole book, but Holly has a wonderful writing style and is an incredibly passionate author! I can't wait to read more of her work :)"

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Busted Bubblegum

"This book is awesome. It teaches us to love our self and bodies and stop self hate. Too many girls nowadays have bad influence from boys. The need the 'it' guy and in this case is Collin. I love you and your books and I am honored to be your first review for this story you posted just yesterday.!!"

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