3/5 ⭐️

"I enjoyed the story, but the fact that there were so many grammar issues really made me irritated. Japan to me, is one of the best when it comes to horror, and to me, your writing style didn't really reflect that. If you're going to write about horror, the emotions and suspense need to be high, I need to feel scared. I didn't feel scared, or anxious at all. Very disappointed, the summary of this story in the Inkitt group was really good, but the summary for the actual story had me losing interest. I expected a really good page-turner, but I didn't get that."