What is your opinion?
Trapped between
"Such a beautiful read! I really enjoyed it. Thank you so much for sharing your work!! "
Trappped
"Awesome story"
Amazing
"I loved this story and how it unraveled it kept me thoroughly entertained and on the edge of my seat needing to know what happened next. "
👍🏻
"Honestly was so amazed by this story! I absolutely loved every page! I even shed a few tears at the end! Definitely worth a read!"
Trapped Between
"Interesting concept and I enjoyed the characters and conflicts."
Trapped between
"I really enjoyed reading trapped between it was a good book "
Trapped Between
"Excellent! I really enjoyed it!"
Trapped between
"The book is amazing! Fell in love with the characters. Different from all the cliche books. And I loved the ending! "
Falling in love with their love
"So romantic, yet not pathetic, but warm and endearing. Really a great story, original and fresh. Great read!"
LOVE
"It has a fantastic plot, I have to admit that I was hook since page one, I fell in love with Drew and Beth and their love. I have never read something like this in my life and with this the writer make me believe in true love. I have read a lot books in my life and this is the first one that has made me cry, literally cry for the feelings of the character, cry like I never had before. I just love the book and I want it to be published, I will definitely buy it."
Powerful!
"You can read many stories that involves pain and heartache and feeling of loss and loneliness but nothing compares to the emotions felt from Trapped Between. I honestly teared a bit and I felt like I was in the characters shoes. Well done."
Hope
"Such a beautiful story with intense emotion . The story illustrated the feeling of loneliness and despair which was replaced with light and hope after every chapter. An original plot which does not seem cliche at all. It's definitely a good read. Absolutely a well-written story. "
trapped between
"nice! but i really liked another ending happy one "
Sid
"Enjoying it... I still hve to complete though "
Great Love and very unique
"Now i see why is the tittle Trapped Between. That’s because he is trapped between life and death. I thought it’s like some cliche story wherein the gurl is trapped between a love triangle, and im glad it’s not like any of that. Love the story and plot it’s very unique and heartbreaking."
Interesting take on a very topical subject
"This is an interesting approach to a very topical subject. I hope you go on to explore the reasons behind the increase in teen suicides as well as tell an entertaining story. I like that you start with the inciting incident - the announcement of the suicide. In revision you might want to consider the following: When starting a new story always consider your protagonist's Goal - what they want; Motivation - why they want it; and, Conflict - what's preventing them from getting it. Present this to the reader right at the beginning - ideally the first page, but for sure in the first chapter. This helps the reader understand what's at stake in the story and if they should invest the time. In this case the goal finding out why the victim committed suicide, the motivation would be why is the protagonist so interested in the suicide of a stranger, and the conflicts are perhaps the stigma about suicide. When the story gets out of control refer back to the GMC and it will help you refocus. "Show don't tell." You've probably hear this before and wondered what's the difference? Well, the difference is as a writer you're telling your reader what's happening rather than having them experience it (showing). Write so the reader is actually feels involved in the action. Use the present not the past tense. Try re-writing scenes inserting more dialogue and action rather than summary. It really will make your work come alive and be more entertaining for the reader. Whilst is archaic - old fashioned language that really jumps out at the reader. Why not just use "while"?"
