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Lotus,The Fall

"Woooow talk about a beautiful story!The flow,Grammar and storyline everything is on point.I honestly cant wait for the next update.You have a way with words that makes a reader so curious about what's gonna happen.Good job!"

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The Lotus - Alexa

"Whoa...whooaa....whoaa... What is this masterpiece??? A big bow to the author❤ I could enjoy every chapter and I could literally feel the characters around me... Honestly, Amelia and I read this book together and it was really satisfactory. Your hardwork would really pay off someday and I'd be glad if that happens! And yes.... as we stayed up late at night.... My dad forced me to complete the assignments. But thankfully I could read it on my laptop... So I loved your book!!! All the best for the future!! "

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Lotus - the fall

"Honestly, I'm a person who loves Rom-coms... But this story was intrigue and unique. I can say that this book has all the contents to get published. I was really hooked into the chapters, and I didn't realise that I was awake till mid night untill my mum threw a calculus book over me! I was brave enough to refuse to study calculus and read your book, only until my mom confiscated my mobile.... But yet, I managed to complete... So hurray! Good job on your work!! Expecting for more great books ahead and all the best for your future!!! "

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So excited that I cannot help but fidget!

"First and foremost I am truly sad that I cannot give a complete 5 star review because the book is still not complete, but so far I have loved every single minute that I spent engaged on it. I cannot help but care for the characters and their personas even though the story has technically just began, and that is due to the maginificent writing style that the author has showcased, because it is hard to make us attach to a story this soon and yet, here I am, completely attached to it and in the need to see how much further Lotus' story develops itself. Believe me when I say that this is not your typical fantasy and romance story and you will never regret giving it a chance! "

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Lotus - The Fall

"Romance and Fantasy are never my favourite but this one really hooked me into. A unique plot with a quite and beautiful writing style! I love u for that. Lotus, Blake, Hera, Malaf and all characters are well built-up and their emotions are well transformed to the readers. Is it intriguing, yes its, is there suspense, yes for sure, and is it interesting , A big yes and I loved it all the way. Nothing can be compared with this story so far and I think the author doesn't get the support and encouragement or acknowledgment actually she deserves. I recommend this story to one and all of every genre caz its your loss if u miss it. I will simply put it as AMAZING and one of the best story on Inkitt!!! I personally would like to give you a Big Salute for your outstanding work and please continue with your good work as SKY is the limit for you. All the best to Alexa, the Author and to Inkitt. Love you and your story."

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Review❤

"As I promised i read your book and i loved it so far everything is well written waiting for more chapters 💞"

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Amazing

"I love ur book dear nice story. U r a awsom writer eager to read ur more books. 😍"

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Good book to read

"The book gives the mockingbird and Divergent with a supernatural vibe. I really enjoyed the plot of the story so far and sometimes it escalated too quickly to the point where I don't know how she got there or what happened, especially after Lady Blake told her to run away. The details on that part need more clarification and how the green eyed man got to her, I kinda feel like he is going to be major game player in this book as her mate I presume. Overall, I'm looking forward into reading more chapters of this book, and getting to learn about the characters too along this journey. Keep up the GOOD work and one day it will pay off. I want to see the characters grow into something more!!!!."

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Brenda

"Very interesting. Love liger, Europe😍 Trying to picture him. Is her aunt good or bad. Surely she knows about her past? Or what she can't remember... "

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Interesting

"So far so good can’t wait to read more "

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