What is your opinion?
Wow!
"This book has me on the edge of my seat at every turn! The characters are interesting and their interactions keep me engaged in the story. The writing style is fantastic as well, with ample detail for me to imagine the world without it being overwhelming or slowing the story down. I noticed a couple small grammar mistakes, but it didn’t pull me out of the story at all, nothing major, just something to note. Overall great job! :) "
The Truth - Olivia Baileys by SC
"Intriguing with lots of interesting plot twists and turns. Commendable! work by a first time author. "
3-4/5 ⭐️
"Things I think you did well on: (-) Chapter Length (-) Grammar (-) Writing Style (-) Thought Processes It just sounds human the way she describes things. Things I think you could improve on: (-) Cover It's not very attractive, I can't even see the title without squinting. (-) Character Names I know it's a little late to make this suggestion, but the characters all have basic white names. It's just a very big pet peeve of mine, so don't really worry too much about this one :) (-) Technical Writing Skills Some metaphors and similies you made DID NOT make sense whatsoever. For example, when you were describing the character Sarah Beer, there were so many plotholes I had to reread it 3 times to understand. This really stuck with me, because it kinda threw off the whole story. (-) Opening Paragraphs The opening paragraphs are often one of the biggest parts of your story, and you botched it. They didn't correlate with each other and failed to make sense. Again, not a very good way to start out your story. Feel free to ask questions :)"
