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Worms

"Immerse yourself in the muddy, wet world of 'Worms' and meet unique characters. A compelling plot, good storytelling and fantastic worldbuilding turn this into an outstanding narration. The author has an exceptional talent for building suspense, coupled with extraordinary imagery that makes the setting seem vivid and gritty. A fine balance of good pacing and well-placed details makes this story a real page-turner. A little work is needed in terms of grammar and dialogue punctuation, but this can be easily fixed with thorough editing. Happy reading! "

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Worms

"This book is very eloquently written and honestly one of the best books I've read here. There's slight grammar issues, but honestly, what book doesn't have grammar issues? I was drawn in by your work and I think you'll go places someday. Best of luck!"

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YES!!

"I love this!! Perfect descriptive imagery of the more horror-esque aspects without being gross or off putting, and the writing style is engaging and sucks me right into the story! The characters are great as well, the healer is a great character to tell this story to the audience because he is experiencing this new town just like us-It makes me feel like we’re on this journey and figuring out the mystery of this illness with him. Overall a very well written story with the perfect amount of horror for my tastes, engaging characters, and great nuanced conflict in the background (the two religious doctrines I mentioned in the comments, for example) Well done! :) "

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To dream or not to dream.

"I liked the book upto chapter 5.; suspense. I did not like the final chapter, too many unexplained things like who is the white-robed lad and what is her role. why is Mateo loosing time/ doesn't he know whats real or not. It is somewhat unsatisfying for me."

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