What is your opinion?
SUSPENSE!
"WOW! Simply WOW! The plots and twists were so real to me that I found myself cringing, waiting for something to happen to ME while I was reading! You have an incredible knack of clarity and describing things in such a way that the reader feels they are experiencing what the characters are. I have nothing to critique on your grammar, that's how good you are and I hope you write more as I would defiantly read them all. Thank you for this story! I loved every moment of it!"
Here They Come
"The suspense and mystery is real with this story. The way you write flows well and reads like it's well thought out. Your writers voice is well developed and doesn't fall victim to the overly telling some first person povs fall victim to. I'm curious as to where these monsters come from and why those things have been happening in his home. It could benefit from a quick proofread but its very well done. You're a talented author. Keep writing!"
