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Top Knotch

"This story will capture your mind and you will forget about everything else around you. It is an easy read for sure, the action is a super packed action book, like the intro says. This would make a great movie I think. The visuals that the author makes me think about, make me wonder what is really going on in the spiritual realm. HMMMMM!!! good story through and through, exciting making me wonder what is going to happened next. I couldn't stop reading it when I started.."

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HIGHLY RECOMMENDED!

"I highly recommend this book as gift or personal addition to any library - any age group would enjoy reading this attention grabber. GREAT READ AND WELL WRITTEN!!!! ANOTHER GREAT BOOK BY DC MAC!"

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Shurod and the Blood Rock Prophecy

"This is a action packed book that will hold the reader's attention through the final eighteenth chapter. It is filled with excitement and numerous battles between forces of good and evil. There is Biblical history in the book including Palm Sunday when Jesus enters Jerusalem on a donkey. It is a book written for all ages and the reader is taken from Israel to western New Mexico in the USA. The book sets forth the plan of salvation and is an excellent book for one's personal home library and as a gift of love to share with others. I highly recommend the book."

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Lacks finesse of a finished novel

"The main story-line is pretty solid. Most of the weakness lies within literary usage. Using modern day language in Roman times dialogue either shows oversimplification, lack or research, or just lack of care. Also literary usage in general. Not sure if you are trying to add a Supernatural or Constantine feel to this story, but it does not help you overall.. Give this novel another round of editing with a fresh set of eyes."

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