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Intense!

"Sorry it took a while, but I've just finished reading your story! I really liked the chemistry between the main characters of the novel; the sarcastic banter and the flirting. I think in Chapter 3b: Big & Shiny Rejections, I couldn't quite follow the dialogues clearly. Felt a bit all over the place. Also, in Chapter 4: Ghostly Intruders and Concerned Friends, the second and third paragraphs could be spaced out a bit more. But overall, interesting story with lots of tensions and chemistry between the main characters!"

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GREAT !!!!

"Okay let me start by saying great plot! I like how you have sustained the sarcasm and high level chemistry between the characters throughout. 🌟 I know I have mentioned this already but the chemistry and tension between the characters is amazing ❤️ However, I think maybe the words aren’t clear at times, ‘cause of which I wasn’t really able to catch what you were trying to convey. But it can easily be fixed :) Overall I loved it. Gonna Keep reading it 💕"

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Enduring incendium

"I love the story the tittle is very unique, good characters and plot "

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