What is your opinion?
Nice to see a new story idea
"Completely different, easy to read, interesting. Enjoying the story, hoping the ending is good or if still going that it's published regularly as I think I'm near the end. "
Enjoyable premise!
"I’m only part-way through but this story is unlike other ones I’ve seen! Looking forward to seeing how it ends. "
Beautiful writing
"Loved all aspects of this story line"
Intriguing
"The author does an amazing job of capturing how dull and repetitive ever day is for Cindy, and they continue to capture the emotion and fully submerge the reader into Cindy's emotions throughout the book."
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"This is the best novel I can recommend to read. I suggest you join NovelStar’s writing competition this April."
Revolutionary
"This has an incredible plot and story line. I absolutely love it. It could do with some grammatical editing though. "
Lovable
"The characters were lovable and believable. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to [email protected] or [email protected]"
Wonderful!
"I have shared this app with all my family and directed them to this story. It's wonderfully done the story line is unique and so we'll thought out. "
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"Very good dysphoria novel, that encompasses real human emotions and combines surrealism with realism. Themes in this book may seem exaggerated but with closer inspection are actually daily phenomena. ❤︎ Also Cindy seems so dumb and naive at first , but you grow to really understand her, especially relative to her circumstances, and damn am I rooting her all the Cindy’s in the world. "
Fat off
"The story keeps me hanging on. Lots of twists and turns. Cliff hanger!!"
Awesome
"This book is awesome. The author has done a great job so far."
Very good so far
"So far I'm really enjoying the story, I cant wait to find out what happens next!she faints alot though."
Brings light to the mind!
"Your story, though it may be fiction, scientifically I think it could happen and from the direction the world is going in, it would if people thought of it. Your take is well thought out and quite impressive. Also beautiful. I love this story. You're an amazing writer with so much skill and perspective. I love it."
Title?
"It's so good I don't wanna fill this out anymore just so I can get back to reading. Pls and thank you "
This novel is amazing i love it, guess i should take on some of the advices here to lose my weight
"I love the book, it sounds more real than I thought it would"
Interesting read
"I love the style of this. The characters have depth and purpose and it keeps it interesting without losing the reader. Great so far :)"
FAT OFF
"Awesome book really well written. Love the whole way of looking at the world. So true. If you're fat you are bad. How awful this is what we teach our children you would think that they would be far away from the fat side of being human."
Cut off
"Despite cutting off your story halfway with a bunch of links (yes, I know, free copy if readers sign up for your newsletter, unsubscribe any time - but it's still inconvenient and perhaps unnecessarily puts readers backs up), I really enjoyed the plot and development so far. It's an unusual and interesting premise that's really interesting, and I would recommend to anyone who likes sci-fi (but not via Inkitt). I'm not sure whether or not I like the Cinderella/Cindy Rella name play or if it makes it feel a little childish. But the characters are generally really well done and everything/one is introduced at a pace that doesn't overwhelm or force the reader to recall something mentioned once fifteen chapters ago. Basically, brilliant story so far and well written, as annoying as being cut off is (which is kind of poignant given the subject matter) it's still been a great read so far."
TheFATOFF Conspiracy
"I truly enjoyed this. It makes you think about governments, wealth, classes, prejudices all that. I'm looking forward to more. "
Good read
"Good read very well written plot was good and build up was excellent hope he concludes well as he started "
