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The sacrifice

"This story is different from other stories I read. I like it so far cant wait to see what comes bext"

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Will there be more?

"I really enjoyed reading this story! I now really want to know how it ends!!"

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Old memoirs

"Good day something nes"

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Sacrifice

"A path where a bond was sealed. "

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Interesting 🌻🎉

"Such an unique idea for a werewolf book. So far, only the opening chapters are online, but I can't wait to read more. It's archaic, brutal and yet somehow beautiful at the same time. I will write another in depth review as soon as the book has been finished...but for now, all I can say is that I'm hooked. 😊"

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Wild

"This book captured me in just a few chapters. The men are wild, the protagonist cool and collected. It's a unique plot for sure."

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Gripping

"In chapter three it leaves you already completely hooked. It proves not to be the typical werewolf story and I love it!"

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Ddx

"Good stuff"

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The sacrifice

"Updates please I love the book"

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3/5 ⭐️

"I think you could have written the death of her parents a little better. It's an important part of Oriana's character, and being the first scene in the novel, it deserves a lot more than the brushing over you gave it. It makes it hard for me to connect with her. You're writing falls flat in a few other places as well. I enjoy how strong-willed Oriana is, and in future chapters, I hope she can stay true to herself."

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