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The Truth in the Triangle

"I like how the story goes... thrilling, exciting, and fast-paced, though I expect a better ending. Still I give the author a thumbs up for the story plot. My other comments: * Then is often misused with the word than, starred for the word stare, they for the word their. * There are so many grammatical errors, wrong sentence constructions, and wrong choice of words which make the sentence hard to understand * There are several word Richard in the wrong place * Dick met Dolores in 1935 but they were married in 1934, must be a typo error."

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The Truth in the Triangle

"Great story line and good use of character description. I would have liked to have the story develop in a little more detail, but overall very enjoyable read. Thank you"

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Wow!!!

"This has been an awesome read! I have seen a few documentaries about WW2 and the topic used here. All the coolest and craziest ideas of those documentaries plus the high tech of modern era plus a high speed chase across the globe plus the excellent writing style has left me in it's thrall from the first page to the last. It has been a nerve wrecking adventure and I just can't believe yet on the current adrenaline high that it is over... Awesome!"

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The truth in the triangles

"Good read. Some spelling and grammar errors but unless you have a proof reader it will happen. Overall interesting plot"

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