Great story!

"I loved it! I used to have a stuffed rabbit, and, needless to say, I don't think I'll go looking for it again. I just kind of wished that your story was a bit longer and included some more of Evan's journal entries just to flesh out the characters more and the plot. So I would just add some more details, and I think it would make your story even scarier. But it was truly great, and I wish you the best of luck in this competition! :D Keep writing!"