What is your opinion?
"Popcorn"
"Three main Characters, Matthew, Alfred and Ivan. The story is controlled in one room basically, the living room, with the three friends deciding which movie they wanted to watch. As they were deciding on movies, it was time for a popcorn contest of throwing a kernal in the air, by the sender, to the receiver to catch...the ending is Ivans comment to Matthew about his mouth size...........I suggest you work on your editing, spelling and use of the proper word you want (part of editing), before you submit your stories.............keep up the good work, stay positive with your new skills as an Author. Well done................. william elliott at https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/185550 Review my book if you want. Dead or Alive.............."
