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Unnatural Instinct: Free

"For the first few chapters of this book, my face was just stuck in disgust and I was angry enough to wish death on some people. However, the character development here was top freaking notch!!! By the end of the book I was confused and didnt know who to root for. I was fighting tears and choked up during the last chapter and epilogue. As sadistic as it may sound, I love how we just dont know what happens to anyone else. Their futures are left to our imagination. Such a great read! Thank you for sharing."

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Natural instinct Free

"I love this story it made me laugh and cry just truly a great ride"

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Love it

"This book was very good, I love the last chapter it pulled at my heart strings. I will read this on again."

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Great read

"It had an ending I didn't like, for Derrick his hindsight was twenty twenty. Yes he had a good development but what happened with whatsherface and Lurin? "

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Loved it

"I thoroughly enjoyef it "

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Unnatural instinct

"I liked how she kept the chapters just right and the writing was refreshing, how the villain turned to be good."

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Unnatural Instinct free

"I really loved this story. Would have loved an epilogue on them too after they left, where did they go and what happened to them ?"

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Unatural instinct

"Well we come into the world blank, just needs, then we start to learn and what we learn is what we are taught, then if we are lucky we ask questions "

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💕💕💕

"Love your stories 💕💕💕"

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Wonderful

"Such a hear throbbing story, you dont know for who to cheer at the end of the story, simply wonderful. "

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10/10

"Another great book I always have trouble completing books on Inkitt but these really draw you in until the end! Love "

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Unnatural Instinct: Free

"Really enjoyed this, nice twist at the end "

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Good story ! Well planned and executed !

"It was a good story, had me hanging on to the end ! Good plot twist, good characters, just plain good ! "

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Unnatural Instinct: Free

"I love absolutely love this series and this one was a hit as well! Derek mad me so angry but his character development was the best! Keep up the good work author. I enjoy your books very much ❤️"

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Good read

"I sometimes get tangled on the monologue part whereas sometimes it is the character talking and sometimes a third person I guess. Overall, good read .. not your typical story. 👏👏"

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Brilliant as always

"I loved the development of the characters .. the descriptive way of how the society affects us . Defying the norms .. thats as far as I can write without damaging the story for those to read it."

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Unnatural instict free

"Interesting book with a very lovely and unexpected end. Well done author! Even if i would like to know what happened to the girl and Lurin too. But really good and unexpected end. "

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Unnatural Instinct: Free

"This Book is in all categories perfect, just as all other of this series. A completely astonishing twist, a POV so challenging, but especially in Free giving leads to an emotion difficult to obtain otherwise. Empathy with an evident villain with respect to the lead character. I would read any of this series and knowing I am in for a treat. "

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Darvin Sumrall

"I like science fiction always have , erotic science fiction why not , good plot , strong characters well written "

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I think

"Nice story waiting room see how it will go with the "monster " really hope the derak guy won't find her or be killed by the monser"

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