What is your opinion?
Intrigued
"I really liked how the queen atalina is kinda a villain here and how you write out Natalias feelings of becoming a queen. Your writing style is very good and the words you use just screams fancy. If you continue this story I will definitely read it! And if I'm so desperate for a sequel it's really good. "
Please finish it! You have a great novel started!
"Love the storyline, love the strong female lead and the knights! You should really consider finishing this story. You did very well!"
Last charter?
"Sounds more like the start of an epic adventure to me."
Incredible
"So I love the story and even tho I looked at one chapter I am immediately interested, this story is great and I might as well continue reading it. You are doing a great job, as for the critical parts, I didn’t really see no grammar mistakes and I make lots of them myself. So I don’t have much to help you improve but I encourage you to keep up the good work and remember you are loved. Sincerely Katherine "
The queen and her knights
"The author has incredible talent. I'm impressed by his writting style and the different words he uses. As a non native english speaker it is a really hard job to convey things so beautifully. I highly recommend this book! Keep it up man! 👍 I'll just recommend to shorten the chapters a bit. Readers love to read a book when the chapters are between 1000 to 1500 words. Also, few grammatical errors need to be worked on."
Incredible
"When u started off by saying English wasn’t ur first language I thought there were going to be a thousand grammar mistakes, but it was so well written and I loved how it was a mix of modern times and language and historic times and language. I absolutely love your writing style and this definitely should be a series because while I enjoyed the short story with well sized chapters, I can’t get enough of Natalia. I applaud you. 👏 "
I need moreee!!!!! 😭💕💕💕💕
"Can I just put 5 stars and say this was one of the best plots I've ever read!!!"
Beautifully written
"I have never read a book such as this and that’s what makes it so good. The fact that it’s different makes it way more intriguing and distinguishes it from being like other books. The author always manages to keep the readers on their toes and it’s so beautifully written. 🤗🤗 The dialogue and narrative/detail is equally balanced and really allows an image to be painted without it being forced. Also, the main character is a strong, independent, confident, and absolutely hilarious woman, which we LOVE!!! 😍 Honestly, I wish this book had way more recognition because it deserves it ❤️"
intriguing
"I did not expect to love it right away! I love the author's humor, and the characters have interesting personalities. Definitely a good story. And I also want to check out the other story as well!"
The Queen and Her Knights
"This book is amazing! The details and plot of this story would intrigue anyone to keep reading. Details are everything I feel for a story, it portrays how the author can use simple words and turn it into something powerful. Very great work and I will be waiting patiently for new updates!"
The Queen and her Knights
"I love it, there's so much action and suspense! I love all the characters and their personalities, those came off perfectly! The plot's amazing, and so is the writing style, definitely something I have not read before but I like it a lot! Another great book from an awesome writer, incredible!! Great job, I can't wait to see how your work develops!"
Love it!!
"The plot of the story seems interesting it's caught my attention from the first word the way you write is just incredible even that I have just read 3 chapters but I love it Looking for the next chapters impatiently Great job author Rihab😁❤"
Entertaining
"Natalie's personality is my fevourite.And the bentaring of Raymond and Natalie is so funny."
