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Fractured.

"Excellent work👌💯. A few errors but this novel was so deep and thought provoking, the errors dnt count much. Strong characters and suspension as the tale unraveled was most enjoyable. Thank you for an amazing read. "

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Meg

"I really liked this story, it's so captivating. I can't wait to read more!! Please tell me there is more. It was so good!!!thank you for such a great read!!! <3"

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Fractured

"Very interesting excited to reas part 2. Keep up the good work. Spell che k. "

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Fractured (part one)

"Very entertaining story, unique and well written. Apart from misused words (it's quiet, not quite- the most common one). Aside from the errors, well worth the read."

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Deeply disturbing yet hopefully delightful

"Wow! This story is both an easy read and deeply disturbing. The troubled new girl finds new friends that understand her and don't care about her past. Then you have the disturbing mental twists and turns. I was on my toes the whole time and enjoyed reading this. I can't wait for the second part!"

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Hooked

"Brilliant! I love the plot, the characters are well described, and true to form... only single downside is the spelling mistakes.... very minor issue!! "

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Fractured

"When will part 2 be available? Loved the plot and the story kept me interested. Very suspenseful ending keep audience guessing. Overall a great story. "

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Fractured

"The plot is good, draws you in, as does the melancholy, angst and mental pain. The author easily creates a sympathetic tone toward the main character and others with their personal pain and suffering and it is refreshing that the school pals look out for each other. The negatives are that spelling needs checking and some sentences need editing. Also, it would be good if the story was divided by a line or break, something to indicate a new scene. On the positive, the author has researched well into the medical issues caused by head trauma and has made the story realistic. I'm looking forward to part 2, Well done!👏👍💓🌺 "

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Love

"Starting on part 2. Hope you keep it up keep writing. Love it "

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Revieww

"I really like this book because of the plot, the whole story is very well written, the only thing I would modify would be some grammar and punctuation mistakes, but overall it's a really good story and I would definitely recommend it to anyone that likes this type of stories. "

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EERIE

"This story was well told. (Overlooking the errors in grammar and punctuation and spelling.) A keep you on the edge of your seat kind of story. I hope that the serial killer isn't who it seems to be as I really love her character. All and all a great story with a little reread and clean up in spelling etc it could be a great story. Awaiting the second part impatiently lol"

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Excellent

"A little polish from from an editor is needed, but a creative & very compelling story. I want to read MORE of this!"

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Fractured

"Pretty good read not usually something I would stick with"

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