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What is your opinion?
Great story...
"Absolutely amazing!!! I cant wait for the next chapter. It drew me into the plot/story so quickly."
Great Start
"There's only the one chapter but it's intriguing. Quite a lot happens in that chapter though so it might be a bit much for the reader, you need more dialogue and description to pad out the story and draw the reader in more, it will help make the characters seem relatable to your readers, bring them into the characters heads. I love the concept, it's clear that there is something more than slightly fishy going on here, I'm excited to find out what happens next! Keep up the good work! Sofia"
