What is your opinion?
nice explanation
"Hey Rujuta! Bethany’s obsession with Sunset Boulevard and her rituals feel so visual. Have you ever thought about explaining her 112th movie watch through illustration? I can imagine a comic panel showing her intense expressions and messy takeaway boxes."
Truly Amazing
"I do not know when was this story uploded but i have to say this story does not gets the attention it deserves. The message was beautifully conveyed, and the story was so different that it just made it more beautiful. The author is truly skilled and i hope people read and appreciate these types of stories more."
Footprint
"Good work of art"
Crissy
"Awesome work. The characters are so beautifully flawed and easy to relate to. The protagonist Bethany Hill is a woman that I would definitely want to meet in real life. The author has managed to make me visualize the story like a movie. The two time frames of past and present are also so beautifully connected as they run in parallel to each other. I would say a great effort by the author and must read for fellow readers. Its a journey that we should all take with Bethany!"
Fantastic
"It was a great book!!"
A story that needs more work
"To be honest, I got confused when I was reading your story. You need to use more dialogue tags and don't repeat words. The dialogue is confusing, the grammar is off, and I like the tone you set for the story. I give you some props for doing transitions better than me."
Painful.
"This could be so much better if it wasn't full of typos, absolutely basic sentence structure and repetitions of obvious statements out the wazoo. Give your readers a little credit. And at the same time, the author needs to learn to SHOW and not TELL their readers what is happening. There is absolutely nothing to think about here, it'll all forced and there is no real suspense or emotion behind it. I'd ask the author to go back to basics first though: they need advice from an editor and a proofreader before they show this to anyone else."
