Finding the Light (poetry)

"Hey Savannah, I am a big fan of poetry and I write poetry myself so I was pretty excited to read what you had in stock for your readers! I think you wrote your heart out here. Every word, ever feeling, you wrote it from your own heart and that's what makes this piece special. I'm sure we've all felt this way at some point in life and you've done a great job in speaking to the readers' hearts. However if there's one thing you should be more considerate about is the flow of your poem. At some points, I noticed that the verses of your poem don't tally with each other, almost as if one line is a little detached from the other. But I'm sure you have what it takes to become a talented writer so all the best and keep up the good work!"