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What is your opinion?
so far so good
"It is actually really good, it is nothing quite like I've read before--in a really good way. This is a really creative story, and I love the main character so much, he is really clever. The writing style and the words used are really good. Amazing job!"
Potential
"The story doesn't have a bad start, but there are some important details that should be addressed. Setting descriptions would be good to help the reader picture the scene. Character details like age and physical descriptions would be another plus. The story has the potential, it just needs a bit of tunning in order to flow smoothly."
