Loved it!

"I loved it! I work for the Humane Society, and I've actually seen dogs come in where they've eaten their owners. It's disgusting and horrifying. Combined with the psychology experiment, you've got a great horror story here! I would maybe go into some more detail about the experiment, and maybe have more details about the child slowly turning into a dog. Some more characterization I think would be helpful, too, so then the deaths will seem like more of a shock. But other than that, I thought it was wonderful! I wish you the best of luck in the competition!! :D Keep writing!"