Good start

"It’s a really good start to where I’ve read so far. I especially liked the summary and how you introduced the readers to the character. She had some problems that could lead to character development and I love those kinds of plots! Something I would suggest is to keep chapters shorter. If too many events happen at once, then for me personally I get bored and sometimes cannot keep track of them all. But other than that, it was a great start. I’m looking forward to see more updates! :) PS sorry for the lateness of this XD"