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Brilliant

"I love it eo eldqt & I can't or don't wanna stio reading it"

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Nice

"Well done flowed nicely "

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Great story line!

"This story had enough turns to keep me Very interested in not putting To book down! Great writing! "

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Wow that was a good story

"Thank you so much "

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The surrogate Luna

"I really love this book and all that it is. It just needs more layout and details in some areas. Not so typical werewolf stuff like she didn’t connect ( mind link ) with the pack or him when they mated. I do love how they worked together the different creatures. The grammar needs some work on too😊😉But I look forward to reading the next book ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️"

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Boom

"Ii Love Everything"

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The surrogate Luna

"Surprisingly unique take on the shifter world. Humans and shifters are well aware of each other. Wolves were subjected to a gas attack that left the females unable to conceive or carry pregnancies to term. Human surrogates stepped up. Watch what happens when you mix pregnant people, hormones and wolves. Oi vey"

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Wow

"Best novel ever🙌. I'm really enjoying myself."

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Lovely book

"I enjoyed this book so much, it keeps you on your toes. This was not the usual and boring story, 😊"

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The Surrogate Luna

"I really liked the plot and I love how strong Rebecca has been, not giving up on her mate. I think that the O'Malley part was rushed and was a little confusing. I am so happy for Kyren, at least now he found his beloved. Is it possible if you could write a story on the two of them? Keep up the amazing work!"

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Fox

"Interesting novel"

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Great

"Awesome book I loved it so much "

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Lunas surrogate

"I like how accepting Tyro is about the surrogacy and how he takes care of Rebekah. I don't quite understand the mate between a human and wolf though and how her body went back to normal after having a baby because of a treatment. Originally, I'd thought that she'd become a vampire. "

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The Surrogate Luna

"Temper! Temper! I hope he gets that in check before he drives his Luna into the arms of “her vampire”. Loving this story! Can't wait to read more! "

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So exciting 🌺

"I love this story, it's different from other stories 🌺 and I love how exciting and sweet it is 🌺 can't wait to read more! "

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Great Story!!

"Awesome plot and characters! Anyone who likes shifter stories will love this one. Some grammatical errors, but easy to overlook. Great relationships of the characters to each other."

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Great Story

"Great story. I love the main character’s relationship."

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What makes a family

"What makes a family is not always blood but the bond we make with the people what stick with us through thick and thin. This was a lovely story to read. It was difficult to stop when I first got started. Give it a read. You just might like it too."

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The surrogate Luna

"I like that it has a fairly fresh storyline. However, the development of the story nearing the end especially with regards to the traitor was very vague... Would be better if this could have been developed more Overall, thumbs up"

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Surrogate1

"INTERESTING STORY, HAD TO SAY FELL TO IT BY ACCIDENT. DON'T UNDERSTADN HOW THIS DOESN'T HAVE REVIEWS STILL. oVERALL OF THE STORY, GOOD, LIKE THE DEVELOPMENT EVENTHOUGH IT WAS CONFUSING CERTAIN MOMENTS. FLOW OF THE STORY IS GOOD, IT ATTRACTS AND CAPTURES YOUR ATTENTION. nEED ABIT OF MORE MYSTERY TO WHAT HAPPENED AND ALL. SAW SMALL MISTAKES BUT THAT NROMAL, SO NOTHING AN EDIT CAN'T FIX. LOVE THE MALE LEAD HE LOOKS DIFFERENT AND THE FEMALE LEAD ALSO, HER CHARACTER IS UNIQUE, EVEN THOUGH A BIT MORE OR BACKGROUND FROM HER WOULD DO GOOD. I TOTALLY RECOOMEND THIS STORY, YOU'RE DOING AWESOME SO KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!"

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