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Loved it!

"Loved the twist at the end!! Really well written!"

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DUN DUN DUN

"I don't always read, but when I do, I must be impressed. That's why I read this, because I knew I'd be impressed, and I was right."

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Awesome twist!!

"Did not see that coming! Can't wait to read the next chapter:)"

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Sweet (as in cute, rather than cool)

"This was an interesting read, I felt it was writing in the style of a book for children and, even with the dark subject matter, it never really got the horror in my going because of that. I felt the most important paragraph in the piece (which reveals where they are) was a bit loose and could've done with some tightening, but apart from that, the writing, for me, was mostly good. A cute little tale."

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Spine-Chilling.....

"Absolutely adored this piece! I love the little twist you worked in there, of the characters living though their hell over and over. Even though this story is dismally dark and gave me chills it ended on such a sweet note. Please read and review my entries: Lover's Rose and Letter to my Stalker."

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