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What is your opinion?
Sweet and to the point.
"Adorable. I really loved this. You were able to take a complex concept, cut out the details and explanations, and create something that was simple yet poignant. The flow of the story is concise, but I didn't feel like I was lacking anything. It felt like the right ratio of details:plot. And your dialogue is great, sharp and realistic. Overall, I loved it. Nice job! Keep it up. :)"
Great idea!
"I love the idea and the twist at the end is so sweet!! I think it would be great as a longer more developed story, did you ever think of writing it as multiple chapters? Just a thought! :)"
