Into the Traps

"The synopsis is what wanted me to read this book. From the first words, you drew the reader in, which is what you want in a book. Someway, you veered off and actually went into dialogue, Like, I know that's what some others do, putting an excerpt in the synopsis but for this type of book, I'd think you would've actually went into what the book is about. From what I got from the little summary, charlotte takes the guy to some other guy, which isn't very intriguing. Continue on writing, love, and I'll read again. loves! stay cynful!"