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Holy sht

"What kind of fkn ending was that???? Did i really just waste that much time for a depressing sad empty shitty ending? This story was fkn brilliant until the last 15 seconds!!!!!!!! "

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Desires of the flesh

"I absolutely love this Authors tech,the way,the style they write is just wonderful."

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Desires of the flesh

"I like the book but hated the way you ended it that sucked."

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Excellent

"A very captivating plot, with interesting character dynamics and very well written amorous undertones and overtones. The repetition of the body heat especially from Aster is very compelling as it refers not only to the phoenix inside her, but the zealous heat prompted by desire."

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A thirsty story

"It's amazing! I mean this kind of story is not exactly of my type but honestly it had me gripping from the start ! Really loved the fantasy elements to it and the lust in the story was off the charts ! Great job !!"

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Pure pleasure

"An intense story of lust want and love that had me gripped from the start, love it!"

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Desires of the flesh

"This story is like an awesomely written kinky fairytale. I love every little dirty bit of it. Thank you for sharing "

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Desires of the Flesh

"Great book and look forward to your next one of Nico and Aster 🙂"

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Desirers of the Flesh

"An Erotic/Fantasy that opened my eyes to the world of Vampires and Phoenixes. A story with strong emotions that will set you on fire. The author pulls you in with vivid descriptions, of love, caring, freedom and pain that will go straight to your heart. Thanks for your wonderful novel and I wish you all the best. 💕💕💕"

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Desires of the flesh

"Amazing characters, good book, would love to see more ;) I'd like to know more about nico and asters pasts and see them grow more as people and combat more conflict but love your work so much 💕🙏🏻🌟😋💕🙏🏻🌟"

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YOU WERE MADE TO WRITE LOVE STORIES WITH SEX SCENESSSSS

"There are some typos but. Oh. My. Fucking. Goodness. You’re amazing amazing author. Please crank books out. Steamy love stories. It’s not like all the other ones that’s use baby words and not passionate love sex scenes. This is amazzzzzziiinnnngggggg "

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Desires of the flesh

"Awesome plot... Sexy reading mixed with mythological vamps and tramps"

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Desires of the Flesh

"I find the story very interesting so far. You explain things in a lot of detail which makes me feel like I’m right there."

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In love with this book

"I love the storyline and the characters develop. It makes me want to read nonstop."

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Desires of the flesh

"I’m enjoying the book so far Looking forward to reading more chapters."

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Love thos book

"Great book gripped from the first chapter Please keep writing "

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Intriguing and well written

"This is a very interesting story. The author is doing a great job of providing storyline detail and perfect amounts of character development. It is well written and I’ve noticed no grammatical errors. The spicy parts are perfect and definitely make me want to continue reading! "

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Desires of the flesh

"I absolutely love the story line so far and just leaves me wanting to read more xxx"

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So far so great

"I like the characters. The way that the story just flows like water is a huge plus. I can not wait for more chapters to be added."

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Desires of the flesh

"While the writing style is unique in that there’s not much back story on the main characters the story will definitely capture you. It will be interesting to see where it goes and how the characters develop. I look forward to seeing more of this. "

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