What is your opinion?
Excellent work
"The plot of the story is a corrupt society depicted with very not vague figurative expressions and simple words. The simple style wrapped in suspense was visible all through the write up. The use of simple grammar makes the story recommendable to a reader whom English is his second language. I love the story. I am sure other readers would love it too"
Really the best and nothing more
"This piece is unique and outstanding. It deserves publication by top publishing firms. The flow of thought is unique and the plot of the story is not abstract. The suspense is very obvious. the use of words is very figurative and catchy"
Fascinating
"The story depicts what could happen to any young African. The author has done a good job keeping his readers in suspense which actually makes me want to read to the end. Nice story, originality 100%. It would be nice if a larger population of readers can enjoy this."
We were not expecting less from him
"The story line is strong. Laced with vivid description of place, time, environment, action and movement of characters. And there are usually several suspense points in each chapter. The suspense i noticed is after at least two to three paragraphs. Just wondering how he could do that and maintain it through the whole of the Six chapter experts I read. Nice one, i recommend the script and i would recommend it upon publication."
Awesome
"Reading through the prologue and chapter one of the excerpt, i was convinced he is a writer who has his own original style. The themes of the book are areas i could rate with as an African reader. He exposed corruption and the reward that followed for Abu. The theme of corruption was easy to pick right from the prologue. Whilst he kept the suspense of what acts of corruption took place and the role Abu placed. To me that's very unique. Then he practically made the events too vivid with his descriptions that i felt i was right at the point it all happened. Kudos. I wish to read the complete book if it ever get published"
Great Work and Author
"Whether the story wins this competition or not, this is a great story any time any day. Grammar; correct and excellent. Plot; practical and real, Writing style; simple and consistent. I am sure some publishers would reach out to you after the competition if you don't win.,"
