What is your opinion?
Very good!
"I’m really enjoying this book. I like the author’s writing style and would definitely recommend it to others. "
The lesser of 2 evils
"That was terrific! I began this thinking he would always be just a man-ho but I'm so glad I was wrong...I also try to comment on each chapter but I was just too involved ❤️ Thank you so much for writing and sharing this ❤️❤️❤️"
Great work
"I really loved the story line and your writing style but I kind of feel like you rushed the happy ending and compacted it all into one chapter. Otherwise I loved it and will definitely check out more of your books."
Good story and very well written
"The story was very well written. I really liked it."
Good read
"Really like the book so far"
Nicely written📝📝
"Nice keep going😁😁😁"
Mrs
"I am really enjoying this book so far, great story line ...chapters very short x "
Tttttttt
"Ccffffffffffffff"
The lesser of two evils
"Enjoyed the book it was interesting watching Xavier change from man hoe to actual alpha. Liked watching her come out of her shell. Didn’t like Lincoln or the skank squad but that’s ok they weren’t there to be liked. I feel bad for all the people trapped and left behind in that pack. Definitely worth reading though!"
The Lesser of 2 Evils
"Thoroughly enjoyed this. Well written and well edited "
The lesser of two evils
"Very good thank you"
The lesser of two evils
"As a first novel, it is very promising. There were a few plot holes; ie: Kristina was moved into a room in the pack house, then in the next chapter, she is back in the cells. Also, nothing is ever done to find out who betrayed Kristine to Lincoln. The story line was very good, and the characters are well thought out. The dialog is strong. I do suggest work on grammar and syntax. Please, don't be discouraged by a less than perfect score! You have promise, as an author. "
I need more
"There is a fault in the story, where she was put in a room and the next chapter she is back in the cells, if that can be corrected, and who the traitor really is, I will have no further problems with this book, I love the way it's written and it was fun to read."
Good
"Good and Sweet😍"
Feedback
"It was a really nice book"
Its good. I love short stories buttrrr she atleast should have felt a little hurt on his acts of intimacy with others.. they were alooooot.
"Keep it up. Well done"
Ddkjeieje
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miss
"Plot was very similar to almost all werewolf books. Everything "rides" a little too fast. For my taste i needed more details, more cliff-hangers, and to make everything slower for realy enjoying the book and looking for an other chaper like "Omg, whats going to be next?!" But, don't stop writing! Good luck! 🙏🏼❤️"
Review
"This story has a lot of potential! The plot is good but the writing style is a bit formal and not very easy going"
Greatly disappointed, lost potential…
"There is a part at the beginning where they release her from her cell and give her a room and the very next chapter she is right back in the cell as if her being put in a room (which took up most of the previous chapter) never happened. They never resolve the issue of who the traitor was that called her old pack. In all it was a promising story but still leave a feeling of being incomplete and needing so editing and reworking in a few places to actually live up to its full potential and somehow that leaves me rather sad because it would not take much to make this one of the best stories I have ever read on this app. Maybe that is why I am so disappointed…"
