What is your opinion?
Ok this? This is good
"So the language used reminds me of old English and I’m fine with that. Wow so yeah where’s the rest of this novel because now I’m invested 😁"
Interesting
"The flow of the story is a bit confusing and while I like the plot, there tends to be too much descriptive text."
A Jaguars mate
"I wish I had read the reviews before reading. The updates are sparse. The story line is interesting but would love to read the whole book."
Another Auther that Does NOT Finish Stories
"You had me for a bit there then I looked at your "stories" all twelve of them. All are "ongoing" except for 1.. Either you deleted reviews or reposted. Which ever it doesn't matter. authors such as yourself give the others a bad name. Finish a story or pull it. Loose the huge words because this is a venue where all types of people young and old come to read and interact. From the rich to the poor, well educated to high school diploma. In the beginning of your stories you should add "you will need Goggle up or a dictionary." Though I didn't have trouble with any of the words it was increasingly evident that you like to throw big words around. It's not needed in stories. If you are a good enough writer your words will paint the picture for the readers and they will fall into the fantasy with each character; following each emotion as if it were their own."
