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"This book was worth reading, it truly is a mystery book that keeps you reading til the end wanting to find out whodunnit.😋 If I find this in paperback I would gladly buy it. Great job to the author🙌🏼."

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Good read!

"The plot and the characters were great. This book kept me hooked till the end! "

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Some Live Some Die

" Do we have any sense of those times from our place many years later? The 1920's saw a gradual reduction in the strictures of society but not in the hidebound perceptions of primogeniture, amongst those most wealthy before the great depression. Those families lost their best, born first, brightest heirs to world war one. Finely drawn characters stand out in this story where some of us would have mucked about too much in the opulence of just post Belle Epoque, kudos to the author for that."

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Some live , Some die

" I was thinking that there could've more to the story than what it portrayed, quite interesting though, thank you Author 👌"

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Some live, some die

"I like the plot of the story and the period setting. Your technical writing skills are almost flawless and the murder twist was intriguing. However, in my opinion, your writing style could use a bit of work. My main issue is that you use dialogue to blurt out information instead of narrating parts. In other words, you tell us things instead of showing us. The chapters so far read like a list of facts, to me at least. Keep up the hard work!"

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