What is your opinion?
Master is a Dark Man
"I LOVED IT! it kept me interested the whole way through, with her messed up thoughts and the way she talked about Master. I never read the 50 shades series, but I do love the Romance genre. It was so good and I NEVER got bored with it. the only mistakes I saw were spacing issues between words. I wasn't really reading to be technical, and I couldn't because I was pulled in from the very first paragraph."
WOW
"Totally unexpected. Love your writing style and how you describe Leila's train of thought. Such a lost soul and tragic view point. I've read several POV's relating to her character but this is the first time I felt any sympathy for her and this is due to talent for words and ability to convey such sadness, loss and mental decline. You did an outstanding job."
Whoah!!!
"This is definitely one of the best piece of writing I've ever read. This is amazing. I loved how exact the words were. The feelings of Leila is perfectly showcased. I just found Christian's words a bit weird for the situation and Leila's witda a bit repetitive. Other than that this was great.💟"
Better than the original!
"I read the "50 Shades" trilogy, but never really liked it, mostly for technical reasons. However, your trip inside Leila's head is certainly one of the more interesting takes I've seen on the whole series. You really capture her disorganized thinking, while still keeping focused on her envy of Ana and her pathetic desire for Christian. It's obvious we're dealing with someone who needs psychiatric care, which begs the question of why Christian ever picked her for a sub to start with, but I digress. Anyway, this was a good read, focused and well written. Good work!"
